Looking back over magazines

From looking at the beginning where I was going my Pleminary task and then my music magazine drafts I can see a really improvement in all areas. Doing this task was a challenge because we had to take on all of the roles that goes into a professional magazine.

I am happy with the first magazine but I knew I could do better for the final task with more practise:

This is my Draft of my Front page; you can see that it is much different to the first magazine. From comparing them both, I feel that the first magazine was still better. But that is how I learnt about what was good and what was bad:

This is my draft of my contents page; I feel that the page looked boring and quite simple. I didn't want it to look like I had just threw it together:

This is my final draft or my DPS. I was happy with the images but they were too small and he writing was taking up too much space: