My magazine is different to this existing text by NME
because of the layout and text. I am happy with the image, as I feel that it
looks as professional as an image from a NME magazine. Some points that I would
suggest are not so good are the text. I have added a little bit of text on the
page and it looks quite bare and clear. The NME text all works well together
and stands out without using bold bright colours. The masthead is very large
and stands out which attracts the reader a lot more than what my personal
magazine does. I know that I am not a professional and I would find it very
challenging to even get my magazine as good as this one but it shows the
difference from someone who is creative and someone who may not be as much.
The similar things about this magazine are the font; the two
magazines don’t have the same but they both keep to the same font in the
magazine. They both also have a different font for the masthead which stands
out further. The image is different; a close up attracts the reader to the face
of the artists more than what mine does. The audience are more likely to look
around the background in my image because there is a lot of empty space. The
two magazines both have the text on the left and right to keep the image the
centre of attention. The NME magazine has very neat columns of text which makes
the magazine look tidier and professional, whereas my magazine doesn’t have
text in a neat column. This makes the magazine look untidy. I tried to add my own element by adding two
different colours to the masthead. I haven’t seen any magazine that has this
yet and I think I can understand why. Has much as I think it looks ‘ok’ it
doesn’t do much. The masthead is not screaming out at you, which is what I
would like. I would want somebody to look at the magazine and remember the
magazine. From the survey I decided to add some of the artists that were
preferred by my target audience.


These are DPS for NME and my target audience. Again they have used large writing to give the reader an insight to what this magazine will be about. The colours for NME DPS were a mixture of 3 colours; black, white and red. I am happy with my DPS since I feel that it is nice a simple; the colour makes it stand out and become quite summery. I think an improvement would be making the DPS look more musical. The layout of the DPS is different because mine is in a block; it is all in one neat paragraph. The NME magazine has used a few of columns. The text is also a lot smaller than mine, so you can fit a lot more information in it. The main part in this DPS is the image which is what the reader is instantly drawn into. The text in these two different texts are very different, the NME DPS has different types of text which makes the page look a lot more exciting. Whereas my music magazine has the same font because I knew that it would look better with different fonts but I just didn’t know how to work them together. I thought that instead of ruining it with a couple of different fonts.
These are the contents of NME and my contents page. The NME
magazine is full of lots of information about what is in the magazine. As you
can see this magazine is a lot bigger that what mine is. This is a negative on
my side because people buy a magazine which has a lot of information in it, not
one that has a few ages. There are a few images of the NME contents page which
is about different things. Most things which attract the reader are the
pictures; the audience like to visually see what they are reading about. My
contents page has one image and that is the same person that is on every page,
even though it is different images. The NME has an index on the side of all of
the bands which are in the magazine. This is good compared to mine because they
can quickly see whether there favourite band has been added to this magazine
and find the page. Also on the contents page they have a small story. This is
different to mine because I don’t reveal what the stories are about. This is
good because it gives a hint of mystery about what may be in this magazine.
Some people like surprises some don’t; I need to take that into consideration.
NME has used a few colours; red, white, black and yellow. These colours are use
so that the reader is drawn into the important parts of the magazine. My contents
page has two different shades of brown. This is good to keep it simple and to
keep it matching it with the image, but sometimes making something stand out I
important and this does not happen.
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